The beginning of the primary school is the first big test that our children must go through on the way forward in learning.
Not only do the children have to work hard themselves, but parents can't be sloppy, let alone slack.
Before entering the middle school, parents and children should make full preparations and plans to fight the basic battle of the beginning of the primary school.
As we all know, the language in the primary examination of the primary school is a compulsory subject, the language winner of the world, and the composition occupies half of the language, so the children who have entered the countdown have really reached the time of "sharpening the knife and not cutting the wood", sharpening the knife of the "composition" and winning the victory of the small ascension primary language examination.
Xiaosheng initial proposition essay: "I tasted the taste of success" two sample essays, worth collecting, worth appreciating, worth learning.
<h1 class="pgc-h-arrow-right" > essay questions for the primary exam</h1>
Essay Question: I tasted success
Requirements: Please write a narrative essay based on your own successful personal experience, to reveal a certain truth, the article is not less than 400 words.
<h1 class = "pgc-h-arrow-right" > Fan Wen Appreciation I: "I Tasted Success"</h1>
Whenever I walked into my small room and saw the dazzling red certificate at the top of the bookcase, I couldn't hold back the joy in my heart and couldn't forget the taste of that success.
It was in the fourth grade, and I still remember it in retrospect because I got a taste of success. One day, the young and beautiful Chinese teacher happily stepped up to the podium and loudly announced one thing: "We will soon launch an essay contest, and the whole class will select five excellent essays to participate in the competition held by the city." The students listened, and the classroom suddenly exploded, and there was a lot of discussion, and everyone was eager to try.
After school, everyone was busy. Some find excellent composition anthologies, while reading, while silently memorizing the discussion of compositions; some find good words and good sentences beautiful fragments, classify words and sentences on paper------ I am also desperately memorizing, carefully remembering, but always unable to remember those sentences and paragraphs, in the heart directly scolded themselves stupid.
When I got home, I told my mom about it. Mom pondered for a while and said, "Your usual composition is so well written, this is a good opportunity for you to show your ambitions, but you have to cheer up!" Listening to my mother's encouragement, I instantly came to confidence and strength, and I nodded happily. In the following days, I asked my mother to supervise the battle, collect composition materials, familiarize myself with the composition requirements, and imitate the writing style of beautiful articles. In the class essay competition, I stood out and got the entrance ticket to the municipal competition with the first place in the class.
When I told my mom the good news, she smiled and said, "Not bad! But you'll have to go one step further and win prizes in the city! So, every night after dinner, my mother took the initiative to accompany me to the park, in the garden, under the willow tree------ looking for inspiration for essays. When I arrived at the school, the gentle and amiable Chinese teacher gave me careful guidance and repeatedly revised my writing practice------
Finally, I did not live up to the expectations of my teacher and mother, played exceptionally in the competition, and won the first prize. When I returned triumphantly with my baseball certificate, I couldn't mention how excited I was! I tasted success, and that taste reverberated in my heart forever, inspiring me to keep moving forward------
【General Appreciation】
One point of hard work, one point of harvest. The young author recounted in detail his successful experience of participating in the essay competition. The encouragement of the mother and the guidance of the teacher, and the efforts of "I" are interspersed in the narrative of the event, making people understand that successful acquisition requires hard work, the ending echoes the beginning, and the structure is complete.
<h1 class = "pgc-h-arrow-right" > Fan Wen Appreciation II: "I Taste Success"</h1>
Life is full of learning. The taste of success is not only in those earth-shattering big things, the ordinary little things in life can also let us taste the joy of success. Cutting a watermelon once gave me a taste of success.
One day last summer, the weather was so hot that people couldn't breathe, the electric fan on the roof spun around, but the wind that blew down was hot, drinking boiling water did not quench the thirst, and the sweat on the head rolled down. I really couldn't help but beg my parents to buy a big watermelon to eat, and the second old man agreed with a full mouth, and I jumped three feet high with joy.
My father and I were instructed to quickly go to the watermelon stall in the market and pick out a large watermelon. Rushing home, I eagerly reported the good news to my mother: "Mom, Dad bought a big and round watermelon, let's cut it and eat it!" "It's too late, it's fast, Daddy is already carrying a watermelon into the door."
I was just about to cut the watermelon, but my mother had a problem: "As long as you can cut this big watermelon into nine pieces with four knives, we will eat the watermelon immediately." Otherwise, everyone can only watch, hope watermelon to quench thirst, in ancient times, there was not a story of hoping for plum to quench thirst? ”
Hey hey, my mother has come to test my clever little brain melon again, can you stop me? It's not a piece of cake yet. I dipped my fingers in some water and drew a "meter" on the glass board of the coffee table, and there were only eight pieces at first glance. Later, I drew a "thirty" character, and when I saw only eight pieces------ I was in a hurry, scratching my ears and scratching my cheeks. Mom smiled mysteriously from the sidelines, with a taste of schadenfreude. Dad rushed to help, saying, "Take your time, you will definitely be able to come up with a way!" I calmed down, no longer anxious, continued to draw, drew a "well" word, instantly enlightened, counted the number of nine pieces. I shouted happily, "Mommy and Daddy, I made it!" Mom touched my head and smiled triumphantly.
Our family of three happily ate watermelon, this time the watermelon is so sweet, sweet to everyone's heart, I tasted success.
【Wonderful reviews】
Life is full of learning, the small author has a novel idea, skimmed the process of buying watermelon, eating watermelon, and described in detail how "I" cut watermelon, and the details were appropriate. The actions and dialogue descriptions in the text show the process of "I" solving the problem in detail and vividly, and also reveal the truth that only by using the brain and thinking diligently can solve the problem, which is vivid and interesting.
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