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Jun A is a person who likes to read very much, and Jun A read the novel "Longshan Plateau" carefully, not only read it, but also really ate it seriously.
The international version of "Longshan Plateau" Jun A will criticize you
Of course, the biggest feeling that the novel "Longshan Yuan" gave Jun A was that it subverted his view of Xihaigu's inherent poverty. The life customs in "Longshan Plateau" do not show the poverty of Xihaigu, on the contrary, it is a very "luxurious" "show off wealth". Showing off Xihaigu's profound cultural spiritual feast, which is not in previous novels, is also a subversive thing, and it is an aspect worthy of affirmation.
Longshanyuan signed a contract with Ningxia People's Publishing House for reprinting
Mr. A, today I didn't say that "Longshan Plateau" was good, but I came to find a problem.
Although the novel "Longshan Plateau" shows the profound scenes of rural life and the twists and turns of the characters' fates, there are still some deficiencies in some aspects.
First of all, from the perspective of narrative structure, although the novel adopts the framework structure of sugar gourd and the expression of modern chapters, which makes the story interlocking and ups and downs, it seems to be relatively blunt in the connection of some plots, and the transition is not natural enough. This blunt transition may make the reader feel a sense of jumping during the reading process, affecting the overall reading experience.
The Zhejiang version of "Longshan Plateau" still does not deal with these problems
Secondly, in terms of character building, some characters in the novel appear relatively thin and lack in-depth psychological description and character portrayal. For example, the description of Zhao Qiang, the younger brother of the protagonist Zhao Fu, although it shows his courage and determination to persist in pursuing his dreams in the face of difficulties, the depiction of his inner world is not delicate enough and lacks emotional depth. This may result in the reader's perception of the character image not being three-dimensional and difficult to resonate.
In addition, there are some problems with the use of language in the novel. Due to the use of long sentences, the sentences are not fully polished, which makes some paragraphs seem to read more awkwardly and not fluent enough. This may cause readers to develop dyslexia during the reading process, affecting the understanding and feeling of the story.
The author of "Longshan Plateau" shared his creative experience at the Shanghai Garden Table of the 3rd Book Week
In addition, the novel also has deficiencies in emotional expression. Although the novel tries to convey inspirational themes by depicting the suffering and family hatred of the characters, in some places the emotional expression seems superficial and does not penetrate into the inner world of the characters, making it difficult for readers to feel the true emotions of the characters.
Finally, from the perspective of literary creation, "Longshan Plateau" needs to be improved in terms of innovation. Although the novel is set in rural life and shows the twists and turns of the characters' fate and struggles, it lacks novelty in terms of theme and narrative techniques, and fails to break through the framework of traditional vernacular literature. This may make the reader feel a lack of freshness in the reading process and make it difficult to develop a strong desire to read.
Qiu Huadong (middle) of the Chinese Writers Association and the author (third from right) took a group photo
To sum up, the novel "Longshan Plateau" has some deficiencies in narrative structure, character building, language use, emotional expression and innovation. These deficiencies may affect the overall quality of the novel and the reader's reading experience. However, this does not mean that the novel has no value or lacks highlights, but it needs to be improved and enhanced in future creations.
A-Jun, I heard that after the publication of the novel "Longshan Yuan", some achievements have been made, these are gratifying, but I just don't like it very much, these problems in this book, I hope the author can change these problems before the domestic edition is published, although, to change these problems, major surgery is required, but A Jun is still willing to read. Of course, writing is not easy, Mr. A doesn't want to hit the author, but Mr. A is a person who can't seep sand in his eyes. After reading the paper version of "Longshan Plateau" (international edition) and the Zhejiang edition (e-book) "Longshan Plateau" and 100,000 Himalayan listeners, do you think what Group A said is right? Want to stand up, or discuss it together?
Ningxia People's Publishing House (unfinalized)
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