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A rare good poem, the style is tranquil and natural, and every sentence is a subtle pen

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The breeze is breezy, the flowers are scattered, and the greenery is boundless and .......

Fall in love with summer because of its entertaining scenery and its intoxicating poetry.

A rare good poem, the style is tranquil and natural, and every sentence is a subtle pen

After reading Wang Di's "Plum Rain", in this issue, let's enjoy a poem by the Ming Dynasty poet Ju Jie.

This poem uses 8 sentences to write a paradise-like artistic conception, each sentence can be called a classic, I believe everyone in front of the screen will also like it.

Midsummer idleness

Ming Ju Festival

The wood door at the bottom of the tree does not open, and the pine hairpin bamboo powder is half moss.

The green field water is newly planted with rice, and the yellow has ripe plum in the garden.

The boat sent the monk cage crane to go, and the clouds carried the rain across the lake.

It is difficult to write good poems in Sunset Mountain, and it is difficult to negotiate before the night flowers.

Jujie, the word Shizhen, a Zhenshi, Shanggu, Xichang Yishi, a calligrapher, painter and poet of the Ming Dynasty in the mainland.

In his later years, Jujie lived in seclusion in Huqiu South Village, with a few thatched huts and a few acres of thin fields, living a comfortable life. But it is said that because life was too embarrassing, Jujie actually "died of poverty" at the age of sixty. This is a record in the relevant information, and it is difficult to verify whether it is true or not.

However, after Ju Jie's death, his poems and paintings were preserved as treasures, which was barely a comfort for Ju Caizi.

The poem "Midsummer Idleness" is a composition written by Jujie in a summer retreat.

A rare good poem, the style is tranquil and natural, and every sentence is a subtle pen

The first couplet is written from Jingyu, showing a quiet and fresh picture: the wood door at the bottom of the tree does not open in waves, and the pine hairpin bamboo powder is half moss; The firewood door under the trees is not open at will, and the pine hairpin and bamboo powder are covered with half a patch of moss.

When I first read the first sentence, I don't know if you also remembered the two sentences of the poet Ye Shaoweng in his "It's Not Worth Visiting the Garden": You should pity the moss with the tooth prints, and the small buckle firewood will not be opened for a long time; Starting from his own psychology, the author not only skillfully copied the psychology of the owner, but also presented a quiet and simple scene full of life to the reader.

Although Ye poems write about spring scenes, Ju poems write about summer scenes. But the atmosphere, the sense of picture and the quaint atmosphere exuded by the two have the same beauty.

The artist first pulls a non-random open firewood into the picture to inject it with the smell of human smoke, and then chooses pine hairpins, bamboo powder, and moss to highlight the color and three-dimensional sense of the picture.

In this way, a kind of "Taoyuan" atmosphere that does not cause dust and is tranquil and casual can also be reflected.

The jaw coupling is also a description of the scenery: the green field water is newly planted with rice, and the yellow garden has ripe plums; In the large paddy fields, the newly planted rice is green and grows just right. In the garden, ripe plums are yellow.

Compared with the first couplet, the space of the jaw union is obviously opened up. With the enlargement of space, our mood cannot help but become very open, which is the role of "space" in the artistic conception of rhythmic poetry.

It is worth mentioning that in the process of writing, the author also deliberately used the technique of inversion, which not only made the sentence structure unique and novel, but also made the artistic conception and charm unique.

We can see that the author uses the words "green" and "yellow" at the beginning of the two sentences, which effectively highlights the vividness of the colors and powerfully touches the reader's vision.

In addition, the large fields of green rice and yellow plums symbolize the full vitality and the joy of a good harvest.

A rare good poem, the style is tranquil and natural, and every sentence is a subtle pen

At the neck couplet, the style of the poem adds an ethereal and free side: the boat sends the monk cage crane to go, and the clouds carry the rain across the lake; The dinghy carried the monks to the cage, and a few clouds crossed the lake with rain.

Although the neck couplet still does not leave the scenery to be cropped, because the angle and image of the artist's pen have changed, it does not appear rigid and sluggish, but just reflects a more vivid sense of richness.

In the neck couplet, the author divides the scene from two angles, far and near. The previous sentence uses the word "go" to copy the distant view of the monk in a small boat, leading the reader's attention to the distance.

The latter sentence uses the word "come" to copy the close-up scene of the clouds carrying rain across the lake, drawing the reader's attention back to the closer.

The former is chic and ethereal, and the latter is light and agile, which can be said to highlight the most typical artistic beauty of poetry.

"It is difficult to make a good poem in Sunset Mountain, and it is difficult to negotiate before the night flower."; The mountains at sunset are particularly beautiful, but such a scene is difficult to express in poetry, so it takes a lot of effort to think carefully before the night flowers.

The poem chooses to be sharply lyrical at the end couplet, which is one of the ways in which the seven-character poem is laid out.

The tail couplet freezes the time in the evening, and uses the smudge of "sunset" to harmonize the tone of the picture to be extremely soft; The addition of "mountain" not only enhances the sense of line, but also highlights the softness of the sunset line.

After seeing a scene, the author's heart was stirred by poetry, but he didn't know what kind of language to use to praise the scenery in front of him.

Therefore, the sentence "before the night flower is discussed" follows closely, supplementing the content of the previous sentence more completely, and fully embodying the lovely image of the author carefully scrutinizing the poem in order to copy the scenery, praise the scenery, and express the mood.

A rare good poem, the style is tranquil and natural, and every sentence is a subtle pen

Xanadu is nothing more than that; Moved by the poetic scene, but also moved by the poetry, this poem is indeed vivid and exquisite, and it can indeed be called a good poem.

The infinite good mountains are full of reading, and the sunset is deep in the poetry; After reading this poem, I wonder what you think? Welcome to say a little bit in the comment area.

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