Twenty years ago, in the summer of 2001, Jiang Xinjie of the science class of Nanjing No. 13 Middle School habitually glanced at the composition topic first when he received the volume. The topic of composition is integrity, there is nothing special about it. Then do the previous test questions, when the reading comprehension questions are done, the test paper draws a big horse, the following label mentions the red rabbit horse, five years old was fascinated by listening to the Three Kingdoms Of Jiang's heart suddenly enlightened, "Yes, look at me."
This is the birth process of Jiangsu Province's first full-score college entrance examination essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit" in the education circle of Mingzhen Middle School, which is also the first full-score essay in the history of China's college entrance examination.
Today, Jiang Xinjie is the public relations director of Tmall, and the flower name is Anda.
Now let's enjoy the full score essay of 20 years ago, which is also a good memory of our youth.
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"The Death of the Red Rabbit" can become the first full score essay in the history of China's college entrance examination, and Jiang Xinjie has obtained the glory of "the first person with a full score in the college entrance examination", which is the result of accumulating thick and thin hair and adding a little luck.
There are many highlights of the composition, here to talk about a little bit.
The first is the richness of imagination and the novelty of the story. Jiang can associate with the red rabbit horse from honesty, and think of Guan Yu of "righteousness", which is already very remarkable, and it is even more powerful to be able to compile an essay with a complete storyline and a topical composition in such a short period of time in the examination room. The story of Red Rabbit Ma despising Dong Zhuo and Lü Bu and dying for honesty also makes people sigh and sigh.
The second is the unique selection of materials and the lofty intention. People have no faith, there are many materials, it is easy to fall into the cliché, making the composition bland and boring. But when applied to the horse, it is not the same at once, and the horse still knows that "the soldier dies for the confidant, and the man exists because of honesty", "If things are like this, how can people be inferior?" ”
Finally, it is bold and rigorous. Based on the story of the Three Kingdoms, with the text as the body, with dialogue as the form of expression, closely following the "integrity", borrowing horse commentators, criticizing Dong Zhuo and Lü Bu for having no faith, and then praising Guan Yu, who is loyal and unmatched, and finally the Red Rabbit died for the integrity, first broken and then standing, convincing.