Tread through thousands of mountains and thousands of rivers, all the way to the scenery. The sixth common sense of Grammatical writing
We wrote five essays on the problem of writing Grammatical poems, mainly for friends who love poetry to solve the following problems, 1. Get to know Grammatical. Solve the problem of what is Gregorian poetry. 2, the common sense of writing Grammatical poetry. It is mainly about the beauty of the form of Grammatical poetry.
I switched from writing about the three rural themes to writing on cultural themes. I wrote a dozen articles after I got sick and none of them passed. I didn't write for most of the time, firstly because of illness, and secondly because I didn't know what to write to pass. In the end, I decided to write a little and make money. I write to mean I'm still alive. Change the theme, the system is not recommended, the original fans are not interested in these, do not click. So the click-through rate of these small articles is very low. However, I insisted on finishing it. Even if it is an explanation to the reader, it is more of an explanation to himself.
Regarding gelug poetry, it is limited to the method of writing, some other theoretical issues are not involved, and there are some common problems of grammar poetry, which are not written, and young friends can avoid those problems as long as they write poetry according to the requirements. I wrote this little article because there are several questions that need to be addressed.
Grammatical poetry is not difficult to learn, but it is not easy to learn. If you want to learn Gelug poetry, you still have to work hard. After the so-called new poetry of the West invaded China, Chairman Mao also insisted on the creation of grammatical poems and words, and when these traditional art forms were mastered and familiarized, they would also gain a lot of creative space. Chairman Mao's great achievements in poetry creation have surpassed the Tang and Song poems, and his name and his poetry will surely shine in the history of Chinese literature.
If you have fully mastered the method of writing Grammatical poetry, will you be able to write a good poem? The answer is not necessarily. Because the method of writing Grammatical poetry can only solve the problem of form, and a good poem requires not only that the form be perfect, but more importantly, the content. Since ancient times, commenting on poetry has been the content of criticism, and few people have commented on the problem of the grammar of a poem. Form is for content. For example, the same is the subject of writing, there is no method and skill, can only write an ordinary poem, if you use rigorous writing methods and superb writing skills, it will definitely be much better to write. Sometimes the positive description is not as good as the side description, and the effect is different because the angle is different. For example:
The forest dark grass is frightening,
The General's Night Bow.
PingMing looking for white feathers,
Not in the stone edges.
The poem does not directly depict the superb archery skills of the general Li Guang, but writes that the next morning he went to look for the arrow shot last night, and found that the white feather arrow arrow had been embedded in the stone edge, thus showing Li Guang's heroic martial spirit.
What kind of theme to express is highly determined by the author's thinking, and whether this theme can be performed well is determined by the level of writing. Regardless of the genre of the article, the content and the form are equally important. Whether it is the height of thought or the level of writing, it can not be improved overnight, it requires a little effort, and if you look at your mobile phone for less than half an hour every day, you will learn a lot of knowledge.
The following questions are added to the explanation,
1, the writing of Grammatical poems, like other articles, should also pay attention to the layout of the plot, pay attention to the beginning and the end. For example:
The Red Army is not afraid of expeditions,
Thousands of rivers and mountains are just waiting for idleness.
The five ridges are full of waves,
Umong majestic walking mud pills.
Golden sand water beats cloud cliff warm,
Dadu Bridge crosses the iron cable cold.
More joy in the snow of the Min Mountains,
After the three armies, they were all happy.
The first two sentences lead the whole article, pointing out that the Long March is difficult, but the Red Army is not afraid. To what extent is it not afraid? Wait and take it lightly, don't take it seriously. The whole article is spent on the word idle. A big mountain like Wuling, with its peaks and peaks, is only a small wave in the eyes of the Red Army; the imposing Wumeng Mountain is just a rolling mud ball at the feet of the Red Army. The forced crossing of the Dadu River, the capture of the Luding Bridge, the four degrees of red water, and the snowy mountains and meadows were all conquered by the Red Army, and the last sentence was full of beauty, writing the heroism and optimism of the Red Army that was not afraid of difficulties and obstacles, so that the theme was sublimated.
2, vigorously create the last sentence. The first seven laws, Chairman Mao's "Long March", the last sentence makes the whole poem shine. Just a few words of poetry, if you want to impress, you must surprise the last sentence. There are many poems that are plain and plain, and just at the end of the sentence comes a different peak, which is a good poem. In the TV series, it is seen that the Qianlong Emperor is holding a flower in the garden, while pulling the petals, while reciting words in his mouth:
One flap, two lobes, three or four lobes
Five petals, six petals, seven or eight petals
Nine petals, ten petals, eleven petals
Is this poetry? No, no, it's not a poem at all. At this time, Liu Yong said behind Qianlong: Falling into the grass will not be seen! So it goes like this:
Falling into the grass is not seen
The overall reading is not only a poem, but also a strange poem, and the whole poem is changed to the brilliance of art because it has a final sentence. This shows how important the last sentence is.
3, elegant, smooth and simple. Grammatical has a history of more than a thousand years from its appearance to the present. The language not only requires solemn elegance, but also requires smoothness, regardless of the level of culture, can be understood, but also requires antique, requires a traditional atmosphere. Regardless of personal style, these requirements must be met in style in order to write that flavor. This requirement is not only for the Grammatical poems, but also for words. Try to avoid vulgar and dirty words, and the whole poem exudes an elegant temperament. Using vulgar and dirty words, new poems go too far, this is a very bad style, should be resolutely resisted, popular folk culture on the Internet, should also be resolutely resisted. Even ancient poetry also pursues simplicity as much as possible. For example:
In order to repay the city with the taishou,
Pro-shooting tiger,
Look at Sun Lang.
The author Su Shi is a Song Dynasty man, Taishou is an official position of the Han Dynasty, here taishou is used to refer to himself, the pursuit of a simple flavor. Tongshun means that everyone can understand at a glance, and do not pull the dictionary to find some cold words to write poetry. Smoothness is the most basic and highest requirement, and it is not easy to achieve smoothness. Smooth and endless, it is good poetry.
4, about the use of classics, traditional culture is broad and profound, ancient classics are vast, no one can read it, write poetry do not use strange allusions. Because people read your poems, they still have to look up ancient books, so it is better not to read them at all. Moreover, today, Chinese is becoming more and more uncultured. No one will look at your allusions that no one understands. In the past, writing poetry should use allusions, which can increase the sense of simplicity. But without allusions, there can be good poems, such as Bai Juyi, Li Yu, Li Qingzhao, their poems basically do not use allusions, and they are also good poems that have been passed down through the ages.
5, the last is the problem of artistic conception, what is the artistic conception, who is not clear, but the poetry can not be without this thing. The so-called aftertaste is infinite, the so-called unspoken meaning, is the artistic conception. To borrow an ancient poem, "I don't know if anyone is there, and the afterglow is still floating in the air." "The mood is the lingering aftersound. The ultimate pursuit of writing poetry is the artistic conception, and the most touching thing is the artistic conception.
No more writing. Friends who read this article, listen to my advice, read more Tang poems, memorize more Tang poems, you are a poet,
2022.3.29