【Topic Requirements】
At home, there must be a craft that you really like. You know it and you play with it. Would you like to introduce it to everyone?
【Clarify the meaning of the question】
"Handicraft" of course refers to an object, generally refers to a craft product with artistic value.
Then, this article should closely revolve around this craft, and you can't write about the plants and animals you like.
【Select Material】
Children were born in an era of material abundance. In order to express "love", we will receive beautiful birthday gifts on birthdays; holiday gifts during festivals; and when we travel, we will also buy gifts.
There are food, clothing, school supplies, toys, etc. in these gifts, but there must be a few crafts in between.
Some of my classmates have a collection of crafts in their homes. Some are more expensive, some are cheaper, and some are not expensive, but they are very meaningful.
Whether it is a treasure at home or a craft you receive or give away, it is the subject of this study.
A good essay is first of all full of emotions, so choose a favorite from the many alternatives to write.
Maybe it's because of its appearance, maybe it's because of its origins, in short, you have to have an indescribable true love for this work of art.
【Good belly draft】
A clear and unambiguous introduction of an object is inseparable from the clear eyes of children.
When we see an object, we first have a general impression. "So pretty", "so exquisite", "so lifelike"...
At this time, they are either colorful, or exquisitely crafted, or vivid, anyway, this small object has successfully grabbed your eyes and made you look at it.
Then, we can't help but reach out our small hands to touch it, or heavy, or light, or soft, or hard, or warm, or cold, or slippery, or mazaza...
After close contact, the texture of the object brings you a deeper feeling, so you focus more on its subtle design.
Do you see the lower part little by little from the top, or do you see the back from the front, or do you go deeper from the outer layers to the inside?
The order of this observation cannot be messed with. In the process of observation, did your heart wave a little bit? Admired, surprised, touched, sad, missed...
There must be a lot of thoughts swirling around in your head. You think of a relative, a friend, a small animal, a small thing in life, this is an association or imagination. Writing them down is a good article.
Introducing an object requires writing skills.
There is an article "I love the bayberry in my hometown", which provides a wonderful example of the way to write things. The original text is as follows:
My hometown is in Jiangnan, and I love the bayberry in my hometown.
Drizzle like silk, and arbutus trees greedily suck the nectar of spring. They stretch out their evergreen branches, and the narrow leaves laugh in the rain and fog.
After the Dragon Boat Festival, the arbutus trees are full of bayberry.
The bayberry is round, the same size as the guiyuan, and it is covered with small thorns. When the bayberry gradually matured, the thorns gradually softened and flattened. Pick one and put it in your mouth, and the tip of your tongue touches the smooth thorn of bayberry, making people feel delicate and soft.
The bayberry was first pale red, then crimson red, and finally almost black. It doesn't really turn black because it's too red, so it looks like black. If you bite it open, you can see the fresh red flesh, and the lips are stained with bright red juice on the tongue at the same time.
The uncooked bayberry is sour and sweet, and when it is cooked thoroughly, it is sweet and sweet, so that people love to eat more and more. When I was a child, I once ate bayberry, ate too much, and found that my teeth were sour and soft, and even the tofu could not be bitten. I learned that although the bayberry is ripe, it still has a sour taste, because it is too sweet, and it does not feel sour when eaten. After eating the bayberry and eating something else, I felt that my teeth were soured by it.
The author describes the fruit of bayberry, introducing the shape, color and taste of bayberry. Even people who have not seen or eaten it will have a general impression of bayberry after reading the article. You see, the article introduces the bayberry like this:
Bayberry is round, the same size as Guiyuan, and full of small thorns. The color was first pale red, then dark red, and finally almost black. The arbutus that is not ripe is sour and sweet, and the ripe one is sweet, but it cannot be eaten, otherwise the teeth will be sour.
Such an aspect is introduced one aspect at a time, and there is no mixing between the parts. Say it clearly, and we will see it clearly and remember it deeply.
The author fully expressed his love for his hometown by describing his love for bayberry, so we fell in love with the author's words.
In addition to the concern for the shape of the object, the reader will also have new questions. For example, how did you get this object? Why do you like it that much? These questions are exactly what we need to cover.
【Outline】
【Appreciation of masterpieces】
My favorite craft
My family has a lot of crafts. Mom and Dad travel a lot. In order to broaden my horizons, they often brought back various crafts. But among the many crafts, my favorite is the mighty rabbit grandfather in gold armor.
Our rabbit grandfather bought it from the "Clay Man Zhang" shop in Tianjin. It had two long, thin ears, a serious look, looking straight ahead, and was clad in fine golden armor. This rabbit grandpa also rode a lifelike big tiger, and the yellow and black tiger skin made the word "king" on the tiger's head more obvious. Not only that, but behind this rabbit grandfather is also written in red characters "Lucky Rabbit Blessing" four words.
The reason why I like Grandpa Rabbit is because of a legend: one year, a plague suddenly broke out in the city of Beijing, and almost everyone in every family had an incurable disease. Chang'e asked Yutu to treat people, and Yutu worked hard to visit the sick from house to house. According to the patient's family situation, it also changes different images, one moment is the man's attire, the other is the woman's dress. In order to treat more people, the jade rabbit also rode tigers, deer, horses and other animals, and traveled all over the capital and abroad, benefiting the people of the city.
How did I get Grandpa Rabbit? That year, I had just started kindergarten, and during the Mid-Autumn Festival holiday, my family of three went to tianjin's "clay man Zhang". As soon as I entered the door, the clay people inside the shop made me dizzy. There are big ones, there are small ones, there are tall ones, some are short, some are fat, some are thin... The legend about Grandpa Rabbit instantly came back to my mind. At this time, My father said to me, "Which little clay man do you like?" "This sentence makes me happy.
But looking back, which one is good to buy? I suddenly saw this bunny grandpa. How could its chubby body be so similar to mine, how nice it would be if I had been so powerful. So I bought it without hesitation and happily brought it home.
After the Mid-Autumn Festival, according to the custom, the rabbit grandfather is to be dropped, then I can't bear it! I kept it and still put it at the head of the bed. Ah, what a good craft, it integrates the "simple desire to benefit the people" and "China's intangible cultural heritage", it is the crystallization of the wisdom of the people. I like this bunny grandpa and prefer "clay man Zhang".
【Appreciation review】
Many years ago, there was a controversy about the subject matter of the exam essay, and some people thought that as long as they used real material and were very literary, they should be given high scores. But this voice was eventually rejected by most people. At the root of it, there's a reason for that.
We know that from ancient times to the present, moral indoctrination has been a major event that guides people's growth. There are many ways of "indoctrination" of the ancestors.
Among them, the literati also bear the responsibility of educating the people when they write articles. That is to say, the literati writing articles is not limited to venting their emotions, but also considers the gains of the readers.
You see, those articles that advocate national righteousness are respected by future generations, and vice versa are despised. Since the ancient literati have had the custom of "burning manuscripts", good articles are left behind, and those that are not suitable for inheritance to the world will be burned, which also has the reason for this "enlightenment".
As far as we elementary school students are concerned, although our articles are not enough to talk about any big truth, the selection of articles should still conform to the views generally agreed by the public.
You see, an article full of anger and resentment is likely to make the reader depressed, so this kind of article generally does not advocate showing it to others, but recommends putting it in your own diary.
An article full of positive energy conveys to the reader the power of positivity. When others become happy from unhappy to happy because they read our articles, and even full of confidence and strength in life, this is how proud we are!
"Justice", "reunion", "peace"... All these are in line with the values of our Chinese nation. In the text, the young author quoted a legend that told his deep reason for liking The Rabbit Grandpa - to benefit others.
This rabbit grandfather, who is full of positive energy and good wishes, his mighty posture attracts the attention of the little author, so the little author does not hesitate to buy it. He cherished it, placed it at the head of the bed, and let it give it its own strength. This is also a point that we value when judging compositions.