A vernacular poem that writes true feelings
——Read Ju Fajun's "Mother's Day Without a Mother's Day And Want to Call a Lady"
Author | Feng Enchang
On May 8 this year, on the evening of Mother's Day, I read a poem written by the poet Ju Fajun of my county, "Mother's Day Without a Mother, I Want to Call a Mother" on the WeChat public account "Linqu" micro-journal, and after reading it, I felt that this local poem was particularly well written and wrote out the son's true feelings for his mother. This poem, there are no hazy sentences, it is all popular language, but the sentences are touching, and when I read it, I am moved from time to time, and some plots make people cry. I have not read such a nostalgic poem for many years, so I should record this poem in the annals of history, so that readers can read it often and be deeply enlightened. Features of this poem:
The first is to write out the true feelings, which is deeply touching to read. When Ju Fajun was alive, he must have been a great filial piety and was considerate of her. After his mother's death, he saw that he had been living in his heart, just like he had been accompanying his mother, and often secretly called: "Mother, mother! ”。 Many verses come from the true feelings of his mother when he was alive, and he never forgot them after his death. As the beginning of the paragraph: "The mother is the first warmth of the child, and the mother is the first glance of the child / Since then, the mother has become an umbrella to cover the rain, a wall to block the wind / Has become the child's constant concern, and the intestines of a lifetime." "The author did not have true feelings for his mother, and he could not write such a moving verse.
Not only the author's mother, when we were young, someone asked "Daddy is good, or is it good?" Most of them replied that the mother was the best, and the heart and eyes said that the father and mother were all good. The child's answer is a sense of truth. The aphorism that expresses true feelings is also as follows: "The familiar figure at the mouth of the village, staring at the distance is the mother." "This kind of performance of the mother is the true feelings of the child from the heart, and when the child writes it out today, it becomes the true feeling of the child to the mother." Creating poetry, writing true feelings is the most touching, the true feelings of vernacular poetry are the most touching, and the source is here.
The second is to write a shocking plot and give people an unforgettable impression. For example, he wrote this plot: "Mother's Day without a mother, I want to call the mother / The first Spring Festival after the mother left, from the small city back to the hometown / into the door, the throat of the mother has not yet exited, it is already tearful eyes ..." This plot is the true feeling of missing the mother in the heart, yes, the mother is not in the first Spring Festival, the children's hearts are the most uncomfortable, guarding the stove is also cold, this is the real situation, spitting out is the true feeling. Ju Fajun's poem, I think it is very well expressed, and the sentences are the shining points of touching tears. The next few sentences made me, the reader, shed tears: "Without the hot tea brewed by the mother, I can no longer smell the aroma of the rice cooked by the mother / Holding a wall with both hands, it is as cool as the heart... It's New Year's Day, where have you been, my mother! This verse is really touching enough, who does not shed tears when they see it. This poem, with many such plots, is well written, so lyrical is the key.
The third is that concise verses touch people's hearts, so they can mobilize the reader's feelings. Ju Fajun's poem is a small narrative poem, there is a story and a plot in the poem, which is characterized by the fusion of love and story, and it is indeed touching to write well. In the 50s of literary history, Li Ji's "Wang Gui and Li Xiangxiang" was a narrative poem, and He Jingzhi's "Back to Yan'an" was a narrative poem of the Xintianyou style, which was written so well that it is still a well-known good work. The vernacular verses of the French army, although not profound, are vivid, lyrical and extremely inspiring. He wrote: "Look back fiercely, let the tears flow indulgently / It is a good day to have a wife, and the children have nothing and no mother." "This popular verse can no longer be popular, how touching!
On Mother's Day, the "Linqu" micro-journal selected and published such a good vernacular poem, indicating that the positive energy persists well, has a high level of editing ability, and hopes to issue more such manuscripts. I also hope that the majority of poets will go deep into life, work hard, and write better vernacular poems.
Feng Enchang was born in 1937 in Linqu, Shandong. He once served as the deputy director of the Propaganda Department of the county party committee and the chairman of the Literary Association, a member of the Chinese Writers Association, a member of the Chinese Folk Artists Association, a director of the Shandong Prose Literature Association, a standing director of the China Vernacular Poets Association, a famous poet and writer of the National Pastoral School, a representative of the "Rural Small Courtyard School", and was known as the god of Oriental poetry. His works have won many awards at home and abroad, and have won the honorary title of lifetime achievement of the highest award of folk literature in the Asia-Pacific region, "Golden Flying Eagle Award", and have been named the title of world cultural celebrity and national first-class artist, the inheritor of the legend of Feng Weimin, and has published 23 literary monographs, "Sugar Gourd" and "Hometown Cicada Song", which have been selected to read textbooks in full-time middle schools nationwide.