Commentary on the Poetry of Ge Ming Cao
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Drunken Woman
Text/Deng Wanfa
The second encounter, her sword
In my impression, it was deeply marked
She, a beautiful young drunken girl
Night falls. She's out of the woods
Fifty-three degrees of soy sauce wine, the true color of a man
was swayed by her to the fullest
Raise your glass and swing your sword freely. A round of Zhuang
The trees in the ring have fallen their leaves. Only the smell of wine ripples
She has a mission. Look at her
Toast, with a pious attitude like a walker
Drinking, sincere and sincere like a righteous man
A chivalrous courage and a lot of alcohol
I don't know if there will be children's feelings
January 14, 2024
赏析
The moment I saw the title of the poem, I instantly smelled a breath of Jianghu. As the saying goes, there are fewer than a thousand cups of wine for a confidant, and a person can drink happily, which shows that he has the bottom of his heart and has no scruples. The poet defines the wine girl as a heroine, at least in the poet's case, and admires her. The wine reflects the character, and from the bold character of the wine girl, the poet sees the courage and massiveness, and the men have been defeated, which makes the poet even more impressed. The poem uses the style of the wine girl to show the story of the wind and clouds on the wine table, and writes freely and heroically. In addition to the wine table, the poet carefully observed and pondered, and finally issued a soul question, which made people seem to have a gentle and sweet wind wafting through while fantasizing. The poet uses questions to leave blank, expands the poetry, and throws the poem to another dimension, which is quite meaningful. Having said all that, let's take a look at the brilliance of the poem's text.
The second confrontation is mentioned at the beginning of the poem, indicating that the first time has left a deep impression on the poet's mind. Using Jianfeng to describe the feelings of a girl shows that she is an extroverted, generous, and bold character, not like the submissive nature of Xiaojia Jasper, such a character is easier for people to get close to and gain good feelings. Of course, the attraction of appearance is the first advantage of socialization, judging from the content of the poem, this also makes the poet move his heart, and his emotions are naturally revealed, the impression is very good, the image and temperament are good, the character is pungent, and the benefits are good. The first section, a general description, sets the tone and foreshadows for the following.
Then, the poet began to describe the scene of the wine table in the second confrontation, if the poet had not seen it with his own eyes, I am afraid that he would not have believed that the daughter was showing the true colors of a man, and the foil of this role was awe-inspiring, and such a girl could often become the focus of the wine table. 53 degrees of soy sauce wine, by her to the fullest, refreshing wine glass, swing the sword freely, the poet described, as if there is no other person's business on the wine table, meet such a girl, who will not look at it differently? Such a sense of picture, as a reader, is faintly emerging in the mind of such a girl's vigorous demeanor.
After describing the girl, the poet switches his perspective to the male compatriot and portrays it very figuratively, "the trees have fallen their leaves". After the girl drank a round, the man on the wine table poured a large piece, like a fallen leaf, and felt like a mess. Only the aroma of wine is rippling, indicating that they are drunk and unconscious, and this scene is also spectacular. The comparison between men and women shows the arrogance of the wine girl, and I can only sigh, which has to impress the poet!
In the third stanza, the poet's words change abruptly and the topic turns. Wine girls are not the type of people who indulge in wine, but career and social needs. People in the rivers and lakes, involuntarily, socializing is indispensable. The mission of the poet turned the girl, toasting is a professional attitude, and drinking is a demeanor. Then the poet described it as chivalrous and courageous, which shows that the poet was full of praise for the girl, perhaps out of pure admiration, the poet wrote this poem.
The most meaningful and memorable is the last sentence "I don't know, will there be children's feelings". The portrayal of the girl at the wine table will make people forget about her daughter for a while. The poet turns to this thinking, with a unique perspective that makes people think.
The poet depicts the characters, sees the masculine color from the daughter, and finally returns to the reflection of her feminine nature, the rhythm is constantly changing and jumping, a short poem, written on multiple levels, and the content is quite full. The contrast between the images of men and women makes the heroine more prominent, which also echoes the theme of the poem. At the same time, it can be seen that the poet's grasp of the content is closely related to the theme, without giving birth to trivial details, and the poems are written in moderation. Finally, it can grasp the essential characteristics of women and ask questions, which is very unique, and the extension of the content is visible.
Throwing bricks and leading jade, discussing poetry on poetry, and learning by writing, this is the end. If you have different opinions, please feel free to communicate in the comment area. If you have a recommended poem, please leave a message to let me know, enjoy it together, and make progress together. I am the poet Ge Ming Cao, welcome to pay attention, see you in the next issue of poetry review!
Author: Deng Wanfa, 15 years in the army, with the rank of major, worked in the government department of Zhongshan City, and later founded a business and did business. Passionate about poetry.