This article is selected from the fourth issue of the "Jinghuahui" series of articles, and I will share this compilation to the group in early July.
Learning the deconstruction and analysis of excellent manuscripts by "pen sticks" is the "fast lane" for novice writers to improve their writing skills, and it is also the learning form that they have been looking forward to.
Therefore, I have set up a team of "tasters" for good articles, and the "pen sticks" in various fields will screen, screen, and recommend excellent manuscripts such as theoretical articles, signed articles, speech reports, experience models, and research reports published in the past two months, and comment and appreciate the excellent manuscripts in the form of text, which I summarize on a monthly basis.
Here are some articles from the compilation of this series to discuss and learn with you.
Today, what I recommend to you is the commentary and analysis of the Secretary of the Liangxi District Commission for Discipline Inspection on "Taking Multiple Measures to Strengthen the Supervision of the "Number One".
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1. Reasons for recommendation
This article was published in China Discipline Inspection and Supervision News (June 13, 2024, sixth edition) and is written by the secretary of the Liangxi District Commission for Discipline Inspection.
This article elaborates on a variety of measures for supervising the "number one" from the three levels of daily supervision, intra-party supervision and intelligent supervision.
The whole article has a clear structure and rigorous logic, which not only reflects the rigorous attitude of the secretary of the Commission for Discipline Inspection, but also shows the author's in-depth understanding and innovative thinking of supervision work in the new era, and also loses the guidance of practical operation, which is very suitable as a learning material within the discipline inspection commission system.
First, there is a clear hierarchy in the structure. By quoting the spirit of the plenary session of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection, this article first establishes the importance and urgency of strengthening the supervision of the "number one" and sets the tone for the whole text. Then, the article discusses three main aspects, namely daily supervision, intra-party supervision and wisdom supervision, and each aspect is further subdivided into specific measures and strategies, so that the structure of the article is clear and hierarchical, so that readers can easily understand the author's thoughts and intentions.
Second, they are logically interlocking. Starting from the importance of strengthening the supervision of the "number one", this article gradually expands to specific supervision measures and strategies, and then to how to use modern scientific and technological means to improve the efficiency of supervision.
Third, the language is solemn and serious. The author uses a large number of formal and standardized words and sentences, such as "strict self-discipline, strict responsibility, strict management of the jurisdiction", "multi-dimensional understanding", "list of problems, compact responsibility list, answer the list of rectification", etc., these expressions reflect the author's rigorous attitude towards the work of the Commission for Discipline Inspection and the accurate grasp of the spirit of the policy, and conform to the seriousness and authority of the work of the Commission for Discipline Inspection.
2. Commentary on the text
The first paragraph: The opening is straight to the topic, without too much foreshadowing, and the rhythm is bright. The language is concise and direct, using verbs such as "emphasize", "keep an eye on", and "urge" to convey a strong will to act and a sense of urgency.
The second paragraph (summary sentence: focus on daily supervision, clear supervision orientation): a variety of supervision measures are listed in detail, but each measure is concise and clear, there is no lengthy description, and the overall rhythm is smooth. Specific and vivid words such as "heart-to-heart conversation", "anatomical front-line supervision" and "family style construction" are used to make the content of the article more vivid. At the same time, the sentence patterns such as "listening to the team, cadres, and the masses" have enhanced the expressiveness of the language. Logically, starting from the importance of daily supervision, we gradually carry out specific supervision measures, and finally emphasize the combination of positive guidance and negative warnings, with strict logic and clear organization.
The third paragraph (summary sentence: taking intra-party supervision as the leading factor and forming a joint force of supervision): "four responsibilities and coordination", "joint supervision force", "organic penetration" and other words reflect the author's professionalism and in-depth nature of intra-party supervision work. At the same time, use verb phrases such as "sound and perfect", "focus on getting through", and "effectively establish" to make the language more pragmatic and powerful. This passage reflects the author's comprehensive thinking on the supervision system, which is not limited to a single supervision method, but pursues the pluralism and coordination of supervision, and shows the author's overall view and integration ability as the secretary of the Commission for Discipline Inspection.
The fourth paragraph (summary sentence: take smart supervision as the starting point and broaden the supervision channels): "smart supervision", "digital discipline inspection and supervision platform", "political ecological evaluation function module" and other words reflect the author's in-depth understanding of the application of new technologies in supervision work. At the same time, expressions such as "whole-process supervision" and "systematic collection" also make the language more professional and accurate. The combination of modern scientific and technological means with traditional supervision work shows the author's innovative spirit and open-mindedness as secretary of the Discipline Inspection Commission.