<h1 class= "pgc-h-arrow-right" > The topic of "youth" is very good for high school students, but it is difficult to shine, and the following college entrance examination full score essay, let me read it again and again, very happy. </h1>
<h1 class="pgc-h-arrow-right" > I'll review:</h1>
This full-score benchmark essay is very brilliant, and I will talk about it here.
Youth is fresh and moist, the most vigorous and energetic, but unfortunately, the more beautiful things are, the less lasting, "the most is that the world can not stay, Zhu Yan mirror flowers and trees." The author thus wrote, a unique path, chose to describe the immortal youth of his parents, and jumped out of the cliché of many candidates writing about youth on youth.
First write that their parents are old and sad, and then write "clear and shining eyes" "The fire in their hearts has not been extinguished, they have never been smoothed out by life." "My heart was shocked and moved. Want to be promoted first, well conceived.
The opening paragraph writes about the old attitude of the parents, the description is very delicate, and the details are conveyed, such as "long farewell reunion like a mozzard" and "the mother curls up on her legs, holds her knees, and stares at the father intently".
A lot of rhetorical techniques of metaphor are used, vivid images, and no traces are left behind. Portraits, looks, and actions are described concisely and concisely, which makes people reverie, and the author's language skills are very good.
What I read most repeatedly is the scene at the end, like the film lens, there is an unparalleled sense of reality and picture, too vivid, too touching, the author's emotions also gushed out at that moment, with three comparative sentences and two dual sentences vividly issued a cry of youth.
Long live youth!