Original poem
There is no one in sight in the empty mountain
Text/Zhang Erba
The peaks are draped in green robes
It's as if it's been a thousand years
A long white cloud. The beasts fled far away
Hoof prints collect last night's rain
In a fairy tale, this should be a small ripple in a bay
"I'm going to come back here when I die"
"To produce another flower, but not to name it"
The man who walked all over the green hills faced the unruly wind
He whispered softly to the valley
I had the chance to hear it
In a place far from the world, listen
It's a thing to be happy about
I stood behind an old man and smelled
rippling in the mountains, fresh,
An indescribable floral scent. This makes me
More sure that in all pleasant places
Every layman,
are endowed with the mana of spitting lotus flowers
赏析
First of all, let's enter the poem "The Empty Mountain Doesn't See People" to understand and appreciate its content and meaning. At the beginning of the poem, the scenery of the empty mountain is written. What kind of empty mountain is it? It is a "thousand-year-old" empty mountain, and a "group of peaks" "wearing a green robe". On such a mountain, only the top of the mountain is "white clouds", "all beasts are far away", and "hoof prints" are washed away by the "rain" without leaving a trace, like a mysterious "fairy tale" world.
Even if it is an empty mountain, there is no gold and silver treasure here, there is no thing to chase in the world, it is just empty. However, everyone "must return here after death" and "bloom a nameless flower" here to accompany this empty mountain.
Life in the world is vigorous, busy, and finally, "facing the unrestrained wind", all gather here, this is the way pointed out by an "old man", and "I have the fate to hear". Therefore, we "every layman" can smell the "fresh and indescribable fragrance of flowers in the mountains", and we are the most "happy" people. Living in one's most "pleasant place", at one's most romantic age, at one's happiest moment, "spitting lotus flowers", talking and laughing, and revealing one's heart, this is the best life that "laymen" live.
This poem is to write about the emotion of life, lamenting the inaction and injustice of life, and life is empty in the end. Several images in the poem seem to be separated from each other, giving people a sense of confusion. For example, "peaks, robes, white clouds, beasts, hoof prints, rain, wind, flowers, lotus flowers", etc., these images are like scattered beads, without a main line to connect, it is difficult for people to quickly enter the mood of the poem. And it's written so godly that it's a little puzzling.
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author
Liu Shuren, a native of Ningjin, Shandong, is a member of the Municipal Writers Association. Poetry is discovery, creation, and each poem is a Ganoderma lucidum grass that grows in the soil of the poet's thoughts. The poems have been published on literary network platforms at all levels such as "Poetry Magazine", "China Poetry Network", "Wenfeng Academy", "Urban Headlines", "Dezhou Recitation Art Troupe", "You Walk in My Landscape", "Poetry Scholar" and other literary network platforms at all levels, or published in "Shandong Poetry" and other publications, and published a poetry collection "Sunset Fun One"