Online Romance
Li Guodian
On April 12 this year, Shentong Express sent a text message to inform me to pick up the mail, and the email was marked as a glass product, I thought it might be a teacup or wine set, and when I opened it, it turned out to be two bottles of top white wine, called Fajura White Chenan Dry White Wine. This wine has won double gold medals at the South Africa Value Wine Competition and double gold medals at the Michelangelo International Spirits Challenge, with a price of more than 3,000. After I picked up the courier, my wife asked me: Who sent the gift? I said that he was a university professor born in Taiwan and now works in Fujian. "Why did he send you wine?" He replied, "Because I changed the poem for him." His wife ridiculed: You are a junior high school student, you haven't even studied high school, and you can change poems for university professors, don't brag.
I'm a junior high school student, but I'm not really bragging, but it's a long story.
From 1975 to 1980, I taught high school for five years at Zhaxia Middle School and Dianhu Agricultural High School. Among the students I taught, there were four university professors who later appeared, one of whom was named Chung Bin, who was a professor at the National Defense University and had a close relationship with me. On July 16, 2019, he came to visit my home from Nanjing, and on November 4 last year, he and Mr. Peng Yuxing made a special trip to our town to have a banquet for the teachers and classmates of that year. Zhongbin told me that he wanted to set up two groups, and I expressed my support, and soon, the two groups were set up. One is called the original Dianhu Middle School group, and there are 43 netizens, mainly teachers and classmates back then. The other group is called the Baituan Gongying Platform, with a total of 111 netizens, mainly comrades-in-arms and professors. Because I was a soldier, Zhong Bin pulled me into the 100 regiments win-win platform group.
Because I like to write poems, I publish a few poems from time to time to join the group. On May Day this year, I wrote three poems in praise of farmers, construction workers, and sanitation workers. I don't want a poet friend to publish a comment of more than 2,000 words the next day, sprinkled with joy, quoting scriptures, citing from the side, full of pot awards. He said that these three poems affectionately praise workers in different fields, and through vivid descriptions and delicate emotions, they show the tenacity of farmers, the hard work of construction workers and the dedication of sanitation workers, and are good poems worth reading. At the same time, he elaborated and analyzed each link, and said it in a reasonable and well-founded manner. Rarely have my poems been praised in this way, and the commentator is Yang Jianwei. 、
Who is Yang Jianwei? With questions, I texted Jung-bin and got a quick reply with a photo in the mail. Yang Jianwei: A native of Yilan, Taiwan, a professor at the Taoist College of the Strait, honorary chairman of the Organizing Committee of the Putuoshan Forum on Traditional Chinese Culture, secretary general of the Fuqing Taiwan Federation, chief reporter of the editor-in-chief office of Taiwan Huaxia Qunying, and visiting professor of Fuzhou University. With so many titles, the foundation must be deep, and the level must be outstanding. I admired his photo, personable, heroic, burly, energetic, at least over 1.9 meters tall. Since then, Yang Jianwei and I have formed an online relationship.
Professor Yang also commented on my writings "Xiaoman" and "Early Summer", he wrote:
"Xiaoman" celebrates the charm of nature and the vitality of life with vivid imagery and delicate brushstrokes. The yellow warbler stands on a high branch, symbolizing the departure of spring and the arrival of summer. The blooming of roses and the first bloom of peonies capture the changing of seasons with precision. The depiction of begonias and moon seasons further shows the richness of nature. Finally, the scene of wheat fields and farmers fertilizing in the small full season presents us with a picture of harmonious pastoral life.
The first couplet "Yellow Warbler shows its singing voice on the high branches, farewell to the warm spring day." It begins with the image of a yellow warbler standing on a tall branch, which not only depicts the vitality of spring, but also heralds the alternation of spring and summer. The song of the yellow warbler seems to tell the story of spring, and it seems to say goodbye to the warmth of spring.
"The rose blooms to welcome the summer solstice, and the peony is sent away in spring." "Through the blooming of roses and the first blooming of peonies, the moment of the alternation of spring and summer is skillfully depicted. The bloom of the rose symbolizes the arrival of summer, while the first bloom of the peony signifies the end of spring. This delicate depiction makes it seem as if you can feel the change of seasons.
In the courtyard of the neck couplet, the begonia flower trial courtyard is in the bud for a long time. It brought our eyes back to the courtyard. The blooming of begonia flowers and the buds of moon flowers are full of vitality. The depiction of this couplet makes the whole poem more vivid and interesting.
The tail couplet "Xiaoman is coming to the wheat ear show, and the farmer is fertilizing and looking forward to a bumper harvest." "Ending with a pastoral scene. In the small full season, the ears of wheat in the wheat fields have begun to tassel, and the farmers are fertilizing the fields, looking forward to the arrival of a good harvest. The depiction of this couplet makes the whole poem full of love for life and awe for nature.
Overall, the poem depicts the natural scenes and pastoral life of the alternating seasons of spring and summer with vivid imagery and delicate brushstrokes. Through this poem, we can deeply feel the beauty of nature and the vitality of life.
"Early Summer in the Village" depicts the vitality and beauty of the countryside in early summer, as well as the scenes of farmers working hard, showing the tranquility, beauty and busyness of early summer in the countryside.
The first couplet, "Sunny Day in Early Summer in the Countryside, Rainy and Windy Scenery", begins by pointing out the time - early summer, location - countryside, and outlines the good weather in early summer in the countryside with "sunny day" and "rain and wind", which lays a bright and pleasant tone for the whole poem. "Beautiful Scenery" is a summary of the beautiful scenery of the countryside in early summer, leading the reader into the picture scroll of the poem.
"The fragrance of rape floats in the wilderness, and the pomegranate blooms in front of the painting", through the description of rape and pomegranate, it specifically shows the natural scenery of the countryside in early summer. The aroma of rape permeates the wilderness, giving a feeling of freshness; The pomegranate bloomed in front of the painting building, red as fire, adding a touch of color to the countryside. Through contrasts and contrasts, this couplet highlights the vitality and vitality of the countryside in early summer.
The neck couplet, "The ground fertilizer is sprinkled with seedlings and the seedlings are tender, and the water is wide and the fish are fresh", which leads the reader's attention from the field to the pond, and shows the pastoral scenery and ecological beauty of the countryside in early summer through the description of seedlings and swimming fish. The scattering of ground fertilizer makes the seedlings more tender and green, full of vitality; Swimming in the water allows the fish to be free, reflecting the tranquility and harmony of village life.
The tail couplet "The lotus flowers bloom in the first place, and the farmer is sweating and hoeing the field", using the moon season and the lotus flowers as a clue to the time, showing the busy scene of early summer in the countryside from morning to night. The moon season and lotus flowers bloom one after another, symbolizing the passage of time; The scene of the farmers sweating and hoeing the fields reflects their spirit of hard work and expectation of a good harvest. This couplet combines natural scenery with cultural landscape, making the whole poem more vivid and three-dimensional.
Overall, the poem "Early Summer in the Village" has a beautiful language and far-reaching artistic conception, showing the tranquility, beauty and busyness of rural life through the depiction of the natural scenery and cultural landscape of the countryside in early summer. At the same time, the poem also contains the praise of the hard work of the farmers and the beautiful expectation of a good harvest.
In general, this poem depicts the natural scenery and pastoral work scenes in early summer through delicate brushstrokes and vivid imagery, and is full of rich life and local feelings. At the same time, the poet also expressed his awe for nature, his respect for the farmers, and his hope for a good harvest in the future. The whole poem is like a beautiful pastoral picture, which makes people indulge in it and have endless aftertaste.
Yang Jianwei's writing is sharp and his pen is tireless. He publishes 1 to 3 poems on the platform every day, rainy and hot, never stopping, he writes poems to praise Lin Zeyu, Zuo Zongtang, Mazu, and praises the 108 generals of the Water Margin, but what he writes the most is life insights, and he has written 98 poems so far.
I noticed any mistakes and inappropriate words in Professor Yang's poems, so I pointed them out to him in a timely manner. Professor Yang humbly accepted and thanked me every time, and he sent me a text message.
Tribute to Mr. Li Guodian:
I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to Professor Zhong Bin for your introduction, which gave us the privilege of getting acquainted, and I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you, Mr. Li Guodian, for providing me with a valuable opportunity to publish, and to organize and promote my poems to a wider readership. Your support is not only a recognition of my creative level, but also an encouragement to my personal dreams and efforts.
With your help, my poems have been appreciated and read by more people, which is my greatest honor as a creator. Your rigorous editing attitude and professional guidance have made my work more concise and profound. Your patience and carefulness made me feel your love for literature and respect for the author.
Once again, I would like to express to you my most sincere thanks and high respect. May your career flourish, your family happy and healthy, and may our cooperation be long and bear more fruits.
On July 5, Professor Yang sent me a text message asking me to send him the address, saying that he was going to send me something, and I thought that he must have sent his own book, which is after all loved by literati, so I didn't think much about it, so I sent the address. Over the years, I have revised the manuscripts of 92 poets, all of them are voluntary contributions, and I never accept gifts, and I think that Professor Yang is just one of the many people, so I don't think deeply. After receiving the gift, I sent a text message: Professor Yang, thank you very much. Professor Yang immediately replied: Local specialties, talk about the heart, not enough to worry about.
Now, everything is back to normal, he is writing every day, and I am changing every day. Life continues in the mutual encouragement of both sides.
I enjoy this state, teaching and learning from each other, not only serving poetry friends, but also improving my own level.