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The article analyzes the problems existing in this program from three aspects: Sabine replaced Dong Qing, and the review link lost its charm; The level of the players is uneven, and the performance is not satisfactory; The scoring mechanism is unfair and controversial.
Then the author put forward corresponding suggestions for improvement: the program team should re-examine the selection of contestants and program arrangement to improve the quality of the program; Sabine should strengthen its ability to review and improve its attitude towards review; Players should reflect seriously and strive to improve. These analyses and recommendations are reasonable. However, the structure of the article still has certain shortcomings. First of all, the beginning of the article asks questions, but does not give clear answers, which will leave the reader with a certain amount of suspense.
Secondly, when specifically analyzing the three aspects of the problem, the author should first propose subheadings, and then expand the analysis one by one, so that the logic of the article can be clearer. Third, when making suggestions for improvement, authors should consider categorizing the recommendations into three parts: the program group, Sabine and the contestants, which will make the suggestions seem more targeted.
Finally, the end of the article should summarize the main points and points of the whole text, and ask a clearer question to guide the reader to comment, which can make the article look more complete. In addition, the author's language expression also has room for improvement. Some sentences are overly simplistic, and you should consider using richer vocabulary and more complex sentence patterns. In addition, authors should be careful to avoid using too many "of" words, which can make the language appear blunt and unfluent.
But in general, the content and structure of this rewritten article have reached a high level, and the author's language expression ability is relatively strong, which is worthy of recognition. I hope that the author will continue to improve in the future writing and produce higher quality works.
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