原文:尽管城市发展与生态环境不协调,
原译文:Despite the lack of coordination between urban development and ecological environment,
改:Despite the incongruity between urban development and ecological environment,
分析:the lack of coordination是缺乏协调,没有问题,但不够简洁,不如incongruity简洁表示不相称,不协调。一个词比三个词简洁。
The incongruity of something is its strangeness when considered together with other aspects of a situation. 不协调; 不适宜; 不相称
• She smiled at the incongruity of the question.
她面对这样突兀的问题露出了微笑。
incongruity的形容词 incongruous 也很常用。
Someone or something that is incongruous seems strange when considered together with other aspects of a situation. 不协调的
• She was small and fragile and looked incongruous in an army uniform.
她人瘦小,穿上军装显得很不协调。