Appreciation of "The Harvest of Melons and Fruits on the Roof of My Own House (1)".
Text / Tam Shouyun (Graceful and Qingyang)
Let's look at the original poem first:
Harvest of melons and fruits on their own roof (1)
Sun Zhongfu (Listen to the Lord of Yuxuan)
In front of the door, I am happy to plant the old Hou melon, and I will make flowers in the sunny evening.
The world is full of distractions, and I dream of Gaza for no reason.
[Note] the late Hou Gua, the "Historical Records • Xiao Xiangguo Family": "The one who summons the peace, so the Marquis of Qin Dongling." Qin Po, planting melons in the east of the city, sweet taste, people called Donglin melons. ”
Also, Tang Wang Wei's "Veteran's Walk": "When selling old marquis melons on the side of the road, I learned Mr. Willow in front of the door." ”
This is to listen to the rain Xuan Lord of the recent seven unique, a few days ago the patrol group saw that the Xuan Lord in the group in a row posted two poems in the group "own roof melon and fruit harvest feelings", and with a group of home-grown all kinds of fruitful vegetable photos, and the poem is presented together, at the same time, the headlines, Baidu are reprinted in a timely manner for the first time, the response is quite large. The second song has been appreciated in Baidu's special article, so I have itchy skills at hand and try to analyze the first one.
Since the title is "The Harvest of Own Melons and Fruits", it should be about the process, fun and joy of growing melons, but the first sentence pulls out the "Tanglin Marquis" more than 2,000 years ago, and the third sentence sees "the world is complicated", and then the poet's thoughts flew across the ocean and cut to the war-torn Gaza. Within the scale, this series of time, space, and geographical transcendence, coupled with poetic obscurity, is really incomprehensible. Out of curiosity, I read it carefully in the quiet night and pondered it repeatedly, hoping to understand a little mystery from the text. I can't say anything about appreciation, but I guess it's my own experience in reading poetry.
The first sentence "in front of the door is happy to plant the old Hou melon" is an allusion to "Donglin melon", which implies a sense of changes and vicissitudes of personnel, and the metaphor is far-reaching. The Zhaoping in history is forced to plant melons for his livelihood, but the poets here are self-satisfied melons, so why does the lord of Xuan "enjoy planting melons"? The following continues the second sentence "towards the clear light and evening flowers", the two "lane" words, deliberately overlapping and changing, which means that the poet is in the morning and sunset bathed in the melon seedlings, this sentence is suddenly full of interest, this sentence closely follows the "music species" and unfolds, focusing on lyricism.
The third sentence "the world is in trouble", put aside the melon and turn to the discussion, the world is a metaphor for the strange situation, the rivers and lakes are sinister, the world is impermanent, "the rest of the delusional discussion", on the surface, it means that in order to protect oneself, we must be cautious in our words and deeds, "everyone sweeps the snow in front of the door and does not care about the frost on the tiles of others". In fact, the author has another hidden wit, and his extraneous voice is clearly to leave it to the reader to think.
Epilogue "A dream of Gaza for no reason", "unprovoked" means for no reason, for no reason, since the world is complicated, the rivers and lakes are sinister, then he is free to plant melons on his own one-third of an acre, but why did the poet dream of Gaza thousands of miles away for no reason? It turns out that the poet said that planting melons is just a reason, and "so Hou Melon" is just a kind of gray for the whole poem. On the contrary, the poet is always concerned about the changes in the country and the suffering of the people, but he just does not say anything, and how can he not be haunted by the tragic murder of innocent civilians, women and children in Gaza? Throughout the book, the author is concerned not only with the state of affairs at home, but also with the whole world.
Xuan Zhu's poem is purely borrowed from the topic to play, the words are here and the intention is also there, this poem is deeply graceful, the feelings of the family and the country, and the pen is hidden. This poem is exquisitely worded, the diction is obscure and has deep meaning, and it needs to be cramped and peeled off like a cocoon before finally realizing the author's intention and theme, which is also the consistent style of Xuan's allegorical poems.
I have been with the Xuan Lord for a long time, and I have exchanged a lot, and I have read a lot of such poems in the early stage, and the technique is also traceable, so I will not hesitate to comment on the shallowness, and please ask the Xuan Lord Haihan to be inappropriate.
Tam Ho Wan (Graceful and Qingyang)
Graceful
Formerly known as Tan Shourong, a talented woman in Xiaoxiang, she is good at poetry and painting.